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Reviewer: Вик Ретлхед (talk · contribs) 09:49, 7 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Beginning the review. Glad to be working with a great friend of mine again.

Lead
  • "The album begin with two cover songs"→begins (third person singular)
  •  Done
  • addiction of alcohol→alcohol addiction
  •  Done
  • The cn template should be dealt with.
  •  Fixed
  • "spawned"→released, to be more "encyclopedic" in the intro
  •  Done
Conception
  • album art→artwork
  •  Done
  • recording process→recording (process adds nothing)
  •  Done
Compositions and lyrics
  • would later be covered by rock band Green Day→suggest writing this in past simple ("was covered") and omitting Green Day's genre (they are punk rock as far as I know)
  • I changed it to The album's third track, "Outsider," was written by Dee Dee and in 2002, it was covered by Green Day on Shenanigans.
  • delink music journalist
  •  Done
  • "—The song"→perhaps ";" would fit better the purpose? (with small "t" of course)
  •  Done
  • fan-base→fanbase
  • I put fandom instead, since I believe it is more encyclopedic as it has its own entry.
  • be consistent with the quote marks per WP:MOSLQ
  • Can you point out specific examples of this? I could not find any myself but I may be overlooking them.
Nothing serious. It can stay the way it is.
Release and reception
  • Robert Christgau said→wrote, since the column appeared in The Village Voice
  •  Done
  • The following personnel can be verified with AllMusic→Credits are adapted from Allmusic
  •  Done
Personnel
  • The following credits have are adapted from AllMusic→Credits are adapted from Allmusic
  •  Fixed

OK, review is done, I'm happy to pass the article. I smell another good topic here.--Retrohead (talk) 20:01, 8 June 2014 (UTC)[reply]