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GA Review

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Hey, there. I'll be reviewing this article as part of my own little project to sweep through episode oriented GANs. I've been really eager to review this one in particular, as it really is a great piece of work and I really would love to see this article an FA soon! To get a look at how I'll be going through this, check out Talk:I Married Marge/GA1. Let's start! :) The Flash {talk} 03:36, 15 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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Plot

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  • Like above, Bruce MacVittie is a redlink and should be removed.
  • "[...]becomes angry when it is suggested he will die." -> Biedron or Lange?
  • Flasone's a redlink and should be removed.
  • "Lange tries to convince EMT Joy Tolson (Wendee Pratt) to give Lange painkillers because it will reduce their chances of saving his life, even though she simultaneously insists he cannot be saved." -> What? She wants to save him by making him have less of a chance of doing so? Can you word it better?
    • My mistake in the wording. Basically, she won't give him painkillers because it means it will make him harder to save, even though she says at the same time that he can't be saved anyway no matter what they do. I tried to add wording to make it clearer. — Hunter Kahn (c) 05:22, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Pre-production

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Production

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Reception

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PBS Documentary "Anatomy of a 'Homicide: Life on the Street'"

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Images

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Final say

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GA review (see here for criteria)

Alright, nice, I'll give it a final review.

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS):
    First, when you mention it's alternate title in the lead, there should be parenthesis around it. Second, "Awards & nominations" needs to be "Awards and nominations" per here. Third, "[...]on location in a real-life Baltimore Metropolitan Transit Authority stations" (in the lead) -> "[...]station."
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Needs issues addressed first, then I'll go ahead and pass it! The Flash {talk} 17:54, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]
    Nice job! I've gone ahead and passed it. The Flash {talk} 18:25, 19 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]