Talk:Sunday, Cruddy Sunday/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Ruby2010 comment! 20:42, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• ""Sunday, Cruddy Sunday" was directed by Steven Dean Moore and written by former staff writers George Meyer, Brian Scully, Mike Scully and Tom Martin, the first credit he received for the series." Whose first credit was it? Needs clarification. Also, what do you mean by former staff writers? Were they no longer staff writers when they wrote the episode?
• ", whose members members sent hundreds of angry letters" members twice
• "the "road king package" " Why is this italicized?
• Indicate who Tom Martin, George Meyer and Brian and Mike Scully are in the production section (producers?)
• "Scully stated that he was "shocked" by Parton's "tiny" length, however" What do you mean by length? Her short part, or her waist? :D
• "The controversy surrounding the scene has since been referenced in later episodes of the series. In the season 11 episode "Behind the Laughter", Bart is featured on tee-shirts saying "Life starts at conception, man!", and in another episode, Waylon Smithers rushes into a downtown church to confess his sins, only to find Police Chief Wiggum has been listening in on him.[19] " I don't really see how those two scenes reference the controversy. Perhaps clarify?

The source does not specify how they reference the controversy, just that they do.

• Sentences with quotes end with citations
• Ref 4 needs publisher. Also, un-italicize BBC
• Remove caps in Refs 8, 13, 18, 23, and 24
• Refs 13 and 18 could use a different publisher (and a wililink). Is Catalyst really the publisher? Not the Catholic League?
• Unless you're planning on making their own articles, you can remove the two wikilinks for the two books' authors

On hold for seven days. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 22:01, 23 July 2011 (UTC)

Thanks again for your reviews! This is the last episode article left in the The Simpsons season 10 topic drive, so I would just like to say that incredibly thankful for all the reviews you've written for these articles. If it wasn't for you, we wouldn't be able to get the drive done. Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you! :) Queenieacoustic (talk) 11:01, 24 July 2011 (UTC)

Well I'm happy to have been helpful! :) What a fantastic achievement on your part to have completed an entire season of episodes! I know how difficult that is. Great work! I'm pleased to pass this last season 10 episode for GA. Thanks, Ruby2010 comment! 13:49, 24 July 2011 (UTC)