Talk:Superman: Ultimate Flight/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Dom497 (talk · contribs) 23:29, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

1. Is it reasonably well written?

   A. Prose quality:

   B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:

2. Is it factually accurate and verifiable?

   A. Has an appropriate reference section:

   B. Citation to reliable sources where necessary:

   C. No original research:

3. Is it broad in its coverage?

   A. Major aspects:

   B. Focused:

4. Is it neutral?

   Fair representation without bias:

5. Is it stable?

   No edit wars, etc:

6. Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?

   A. Images are tagged with their copyright status, and valid fair use rationales are provided for non-free content:

   B. Images are provided if possible and are relevant to the topic, and have suitable captions:

7. Overall:

   Pass or Fail:

   Pass!--Dom497 (talk) 19:17, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Thanks very much for the review. Themeparkgc  Talk  23:20, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Comments

• "The ride at Six Flags Great America ultimately opened on May 3, 2003" - Is the word "ultimately" really needed?--Dom497 (talk) 23:46, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

 Removed Themeparkgc  Talk  06:22, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

• "The 2003 versions differ slightly from the original in Georgia; however, the majority of the layout remains the same." - Should this really be in the 'History' section? Sounds more suitable for the 'Characteristic' section as it already is so maybe just remove this statement?.-Dom497 (talk) 23:46, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

 Removed Themeparkgc  Talk  06:22, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

• Ref 17 is redirecting.--Dom497 (talk) 23:46, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

 Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  06:22, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

• "...the on-ride camera photographs them." - Ref?--Dom497 (talk) 23:46, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

 Removed Themeparkgc  Talk  06:22, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

• Any awards? I would check but I got no time (I know, it sounds like an excuse but its not).--Dom497 (talk) 23:46, 19 May 2013 (UTC)

 Working Themeparkgc  Talk  06:22, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

 Done I don't think it won any awards as such but I have added some rankings from the Golden Ticket Awards and Best Roller Coaster Poll. Themeparkgc  Talk  06:44, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

• Just a small pet peeve of mine...in the ref section, some have it dd-mm-yyyy while others have mm-dd-yyyy. Maybe pick one format to make them consistent?--Dom497 (talk) 17:16, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

 Fixed Themeparkgc  Talk  04:31, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

• Does there really have to be external links to RCDB when they are already refs?--Dom497 (talk) 17:16, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

I think the duplication of the links certainly serves a purpose here. I think it helps supplement having just three official websites there and provides a bit more balance. Themeparkgc  Talk  04:31, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Fair enough.--Dom497 (talk) 19:17, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

• This is more of a question from me to you as it was brought up in the SheiKra FA review: Should the Amusement Today refs use the cite journal template rather than the cite web?--Dom497 (talk) 17:16, 20 May 2013 (UTC)

Since Amusement Today is a periodical, then it should use cite journal, shouldn't it? The article currently uses this template. Themeparkgc  Talk  04:31, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

Makes sense. Wasn't really part of this review, just a question I had for you. :P --Dom497 (talk) 19:17, 21 May 2013 (UTC)

This should be it. Good job!.--Dom497 (talk) 17:16, 20 May 2013 (UTC)