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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 18:34, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]


Comments

  • "money of £4,000" inflate.
  • "and no other aircraft" well, no more Commercial Amphibians.
  • "seaplanes" could link.
  • Could link Aerospace industry in the United Kingdom?
  • "stations at Martlesham and" not Martlesham Heath?
  • "£4,000 was doubled to £8000 " inflate, consistent commas.
  • Can we make ISBNs consistent format?

That's literally all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 20:31, 5 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]

@The Rambling Man: Thanks for the review, all the above comments have been addressed Amitchell125 (talk) 05:57, 6 September 2021 (UTC)[reply]