Talk:Supermarine Seamew/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: PizzaKing13 (talk · contribs) 23:23, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

I'll review this article. PizzaKing13 ^¡Hablame! 23:23, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

Design and development

• Put a space between R. and J. (in the infobox and lead too)

Done. AM

• Why was he preparing drawings, were they ordered by the Air Ministry?

Supermarine sometimes submitted ideas as drawings, the ones for the Seamew were accepted by the Air Ministry. Text amended to clarify this. Amitchell125 (talk) 06:52, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

• Replace the period after "a crew of three" with a semicolon and lowercase the succeeding "The"

Done. AM

• When was the aircraft named Seamew?

When the contract was awarded, text amended. Amitchell125 (talk) 07:35, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

• Remove the comma after "radial engines"

Done. AM

• Combine paragraphs 3 and 4 together

Done. AM

• "scaled-down version of the Southampton" link Southampton here and delink it in the next paragraph

Done. AM

• "height of 13 ft 1" is this supposed to mean 13 ft 1 in?

Sorted. AM

• Remove "in earnest"

Done. AM

Testing and operational history

• "in March 1930" capitalize "In"

Done. AM

Overall

• Neutral
• Broad and focused
• No war edits
• Image properly licensed
• Sources ok

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

@Amitchell125: I've left some comments. PizzaKing13 ^¡Hablame! 23:34, 1 August 2023 (UTC)

@PizzaKing13: above comments done. Amitchell125 (talk) 11:47, 2 August 2023 (UTC)

@Amitchell125: Everything looks good. Well done, I'll pass this review. PizzaKing13 ^¡Hablame! 19:55, 2 August 2023 (UTC)