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Reviewer: DivaKnockouts (talk · contribs) 04:26, 2 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox
  • The length parameter needs to be completed (53:36 according to Allmusic)
fixed.
fixed.
Lead
  • "is a studio album" → "is the twenty-first studio album"
I do not know if this applies here because the album is credited to the "Gonzalo Rubalcaba Trio", what should I do?
Well, I went by what Allmusic provided. I guess leave as is.
fixed.
Background and release
  • Separate this section into two paragraphs.
fixed.
  • "Rubalcaba along bassist Carlos Henriguez" — ℳissing a word.
Which word?
It should be "Rubalcaba along with bassist Carlos Henriguez". I'll take care of this.
  • "Heckman described the songs as "pieces roved through unusual metric territory, with explosive accents bursting out of the rhythmic flow." — This feels out of place, why is this not in the content section?
I thought so, but since the reviewer was talking about that performance I put it there, should I it?
I thought he might have been talking about the performance. Okay here.
Content
  • "The Hard One" is a re-recording of the original take included on Rubalcaba's Inner Voyage, samples "Take Five" by Dave Brubeck, and features Rubalcaba's piano rumbling in "metrical unpredictability. — Separate this into a couple of sentences.
fixed.
  • What is a waltz? Provide information for the involved reader.
Reception and accolades
fixed.
  • "better on the audience" → "better on an audience"
fixed.
Tracklisting
  • Rename to "Track listing"
fixed.
  • This track listing is not the same as the one provided by Allmusic
Personnel
  • Looks good here
References
fixed.
fixed.
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Didn't find one.
fixed.
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  • FN#16 — Again, Rovi Corporation does not publish Billboard, change to Prometheus Global Media
fixed.

Not required, however I recommend you archive some of these links as they are very old. Overall, the article is very well rounded, summarizing the main points. Putting article  On hold until these minor issues are addressed. — DivaKnockouts 16:06, 2 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]

 Pass article. All issues have been addressed. — DivaKnockouts 02:12, 6 May 2013 (UTC)[reply]