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Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 14:50, 23 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]


Happy to offer a review. Josh Milburn (talk) 14:50, 23 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • "Recognizing its genetic and morphological distinctiveness, they created the genus Sutorius, placing S. eximius as the type species." Is "placing" really the right word, here?
  • Does "spindle shaped" need a dash?
  • Could we perhaps have an indication of the range of Tylopilus violatinctus? (I tweaked that paragraph a little- please make sure you're happy with it!)
  • What are your five continents (as mentioned in the lead)? I'm seeing North America, South America and Asia- this is also reflected in the categories.
  • I seem to have misread the Halling paper; it's the genus that has been reported from 5 continents (S. australensis from Australia and a not-yet described species from Africa). Fixed. Sasata (talk) 18:21, 23 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]
  • Not a complaint at all, I just wanted to say how much I liked the phrase "esculent properties". I write a lot about food in my real-world work, so I'll try to work that in!
  • Should your Smith/Thiers source have an italicised title?
  • Perhaps include a translated title for your Pomerleau source?
  • The formatting on the Wang/Zang strikes me as a little off- how about something like:
  • Images mostly check out- I'm not adding that "license check" template as I'm not sure if I count as a trusted user any more (I lost my adminship due to "inactivity"...). The one problem is that the source on the lead image is dead, and it hadn't been checked by anyone; I can't find the image or user on the site after a quick search. Sorry to be a pain, but I think something needs to be done about this before I can promote.

Really nice little article- the only concern is the image. Josh Milburn (talk) 15:33, 23 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]