Talk:Suze (The Cough Song)/GA1

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]


This should be done quickly! --K. Peake 20:05, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
    b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a. (reference section):
    b. (citations to reliable sources):
    c. (OR):
    d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a. (major aspects):
    b. (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
    b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead[edit]

  • How long ago dates were does not need to be noted in the infobox
  • The exacty recording date and studio are not sourced anywhere in the body
  • WP:OVERLINK of Columbia under label(s)
  • "during the sessions for" → "during the sessions for his third studio album,"
  • "The track was written" → "The song was written"
  • "by Dylan and produced by" → "by Dylan, and produced by"
  • "started ninety seconds" → "started 90 seconds" per MOS:NUM
  • Move the standalone sentence to being in the same para as the rest since this is not enough on its own
  • "found the track enjoyable." → "found the song enjoyable."

Background and recording[edit]

  • Add a comma after E tuning
  • "ninety seconds into" → "90 seconds into" per MOS:NUM
  • "before saying that the song" → "until saying that the song" to avoid using before twice in one sentence
  • "and the stanza's return." is this definitely about one stanza because if multiple, remove the apostrophe
  • Source has "Dylan accompanies the bridge and stanza’s return with harmonica." BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:35, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Pipe Jimmie Tarlton to Darby and Tarlton
  • Add double speech marks around "Percy's Song"

Release and reception[edit]

  • The tense of reviews needs to be consistent

Personnel[edit]

  • Good

References[edit]

Final comments and verdict[edit]

  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 20:39, 23 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • Many thanks, K. Peake. Hopefully I've fixed everything, but let me know if more work is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:41, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • ✓ Pass now, thanks for the response within the expected timeframe of a week! --K. Peake 18:25, 30 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]
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