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Reviewer: Kpgjhpjm (talk · contribs) 15:48, 1 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Dlamini was chosen as the flag-bearer for the opening ceremony . There were two Dlaminis.
  • seventh and last in her heat, and over nine seconds behind the heat's winner, Shericka Williams of Jamaica, and Dlamini was eliminated - rewrite to seventh and last in her heat, over nine seconds behind the heat's winner, Shericka Williams of Jamaica, and was eliminated from the competition
  • and Dlamini was eliminated from the competition ---> and thus, Dlamini was eliminated from the competition.
  • They did not send a team to The nation did not send a delegation
  • You wrote Dlamini first and Mbisi second in the athletics section but you wrote the reverse in the table . Consider swapping the athletes in the table .
  • The prose says Dlamini finished seventh in her heat but the table says eighth. Please correct them .

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@Courcelles: The review is now complete. The article only needs a few fixes and it will get to GA status. Kpgjhpjm 15:48, 1 December 2018 (UTC)[reply]