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Why I removed the primarysources notice from the webpage?[edit]

I have done extensive editing to the page and also added references and citations from various sources. Hence, I believe the page is good enough. I don't know if there is any procedure for requesting a removal of the notice, but I have a posted a quality-review request on Wikipedia:WikiProject India/Assessment.

If anyone still feels that this is not enough, please feel free to put back the notice again and also guide me as to how to improve further.

Thanks Knight Samar (talk) 13:48, 5 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

==Things to fix with this article -- 2 == Knight Samar (talk) 13:37, 5 December 2009 (UTC) 1. References to any other student activities to be added. 2. Photos of the college and students if available to be featured -- only the relevant ones. 3. Information about the alumni of college should be added.[reply]

Things to fix with this article[edit]

The following should be done by someone more familiar with the institute in question:

  • Location and affiliations of this institute are not mentioned. You would not know, from reading this article, in which country let alone which locality the institute is located, and what other educational institutions (if any) it is affiliated with Tschild 09:49, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • reads like a promotional article (The institute is continually evolving to meet its goals in an ever-changing business environment. It is committed to deliver a world class education for its students.; SICSR has truly world class, state-of-the-art Information Technology tools that are designed to meet the computing and communication needs of the institute.) - that's content-free promotional speech. Tschild 09:49, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

Things that I have already done[edit]

  • added advert and cleanup tags (again - did so yesterday, were deleted) Tschild 09:49, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • added categories for locality and state (again - did so yesterday, were deleted) Tschild 09:49, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]
  • moved page to insert a space before (SICSR) Tschild 09:54, 15 December 2006 (UTC)[reply]

review comments[edit]

  • 1) citation style. please change all the references to the following format: [1]
  • 2) avoid peacock terms like "eminent personalities"
  • 3)Change section header from "Programmes Offered" to "Academic programmes". State the UG and PG courses in sub headers.
  • 4)"SICSR has been one of the local pioneers in the Open source movement". source for this assertion?. if someone haven't called SICSR as such, this becomes opinion. If there is no citation, then it can be changed to "SICCS is involved in the Open source movement"
  • 5) "Prof. Harshad Gune, a permanent faculty in SICSR, is a Board member of the Open Source Initiative." citation?
  • 6) A separate history section would be better explaining years of establishment and other important milestones in SICSR history.
  • 7) Student strength, Admission criteria, notable alumni (preferably ones with their own wiki articles) etc would be better.
  • 8) Currently the article focuses on student activities and FOSS. History, campus, faculty, academic research etc would make this a well rounded one.
  • 9) Photos of the campus can be added - ask permission from the campus website and add them or if you are a current/ex student, you can add your own

--Sodabottle (talk) 14:28, 5 December 2009 (UTC)[reply]

  1. ^ Symbiosis International University (SIU)
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