Talk:TT1/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Merytat3n (talk · contribs) 02:00, 25 June 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 13:35, 30 July 2024 (UTC)[reply]

"Sennedjem had a probable elder brother named Tjaro" can this awkward sentence be reworded?
"Above this is a small section of a band of text giving Khonsu's name and title" could you clarify what this was?
The tomb descended further via a concealed shaft leading to a painted doorway closed with a decorated door sealed with a moulded clay seal in the shape of the head of the god Anubis run on sentence
It led to a series of underground rooms, including the extensively decorated burial chamber is past tense used for a reason?
further chamber 3.50 metres (11.5 ft) square units?
Glosses: barque, lintel, sem-priest, leonine-bier, imiut fetishes, solar bull, ostraca.
I would suggest subheadings in the decorations section as there is a lot of text describing.
Little is known about the exact positions of the objects and burials as no plan was made and few photographs were taken. and The exact positions of the objects within the burial chamber at the time of discovery is unknown as no plan was made and few photographs were taken dupe