Talk:Talk That Talk (Rihanna song)/GA1

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 00:38, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Hello :)

Lead

• Def Jam Recordings serviced the song to urban radio in the United States on January 17, 2012 as third single from Talk That Talk. - missing a word.

• I think I added the right one. — Tomica (talk) 13:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Background

• On November 8, 2011, again, via her official Twitter she confirmed that her mentor, the American rapper Jay-Z, - the word "the" needs to be removed.

•  Done — Tomica (talk) 13:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Release

• In late December, 2011, Rihanna took again her Twitter account to ask her fans which song from Talk That Talk should be released as third single. - (a) coma before 2011 needs to be removed (b) a word is missing from this sentence.

•  Done i guess — Tomica (talk) 13:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

• "Talk That Talk" was released as a CD single in France on March 26, 2012. It contains the album version of the song and the Chuckie Extended Remix of "We Found Love" - delink "We Found Love" already liked in the previous section.

•  Done — Tomica (talk) 13:25, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

Please fix these remaining issues before spot checking. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 00:38, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

• (Non-reviewer comments) A couple of observations in reception section:
  • "Laurence Green of MusicOMH positively reviews the song and stated" --> Needs fixing
  • Sputnik Music is just one word (Sputnikmusic)

That's all :) Till 14:13, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

•  Done. Thanks Till, appreciate it. ;) — Tomica (talk) 14:33, 18 June 2012 (UTC)

References

• FN#8 shouldn't the album be italicized?

•  Done — Tomica (talk) 23:04, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

• FN#16 I'm still sketchy on amazon being used as a reliable source. Can you spot out any recent GAs (from experienced reviewers) or guidelines that allow amazon?

• Look at this — Tomica (talk) 23:04, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

• FN#20 and FN#21 wouldn't it be iTunes Store?

 Done — Tomica (talk) 23:04, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

• FN#35 be consistent in weather or not you link every instance of Prometheus Global Media compare with FN#33

 Done — Tomica (talk) 23:04, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

• FN#49 publisher?

 Done — Tomica (talk) 23:04, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Please fix these. Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 22:01, 19 June 2012 (UTC)

Looks good now. Great job once again :) Best, Jonayo! ^{Selena 4 ever} 13:00, 20 June 2012 (UTC)