Talk:Tanjong Katong MRT station/GA1

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Nominator: ZKang123 (talk · contribs) 09:36, 5 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: Rollinginhisgrave (talk · contribs) 12:02, 17 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

First sentence, or at most second should mention that this is in Singapore.
along with a mural Riding add "entitled"
The station was first announced as Amber + "station"
while the owners seek more compensation past tense
On 5 March 2024, the LTA announced that the station will open on 23 June that year[11][12] with an open house event being held on 21 June to allow commuters to familiarise themselves with the new station. use sources saying that these things happened and reword to avoid "it was announced it would open on X date" and then "it opened on X date".
The artwork, which title was derived grammar
Di Tanjung Katong gloss, I assumed it was a poem but it appears to be a song
As a reflection of Tanjong Katong's past and memories too literary
"hidden histories" found in the sediments left over from land reclamation Can you be more clear what this means?
Why is turtle capitalised?
From some Googling, it seems the Katong Turtle is extinct rather than endangered.
Tell me about the Maybe add presentation of mural to Mountbatten SMC advisor? comment
Conform to sentence case of Sim Chi Yin's artwork
Remove hyphens in Art-in-Transit to conform to source

Spot check:

[3] Y
[6] Y
[9] Y
[12] Y
[15] Y
[18] clock a different source should be added here inline to say it's below Amber Rd. Looking at the maps, it's not even apparent that it is built under Amber Rd
[19] clock ^
[21] Y
[24] Y
[27] Y
[30] clock duplication of [27], tension with linked source in prose/content review on turtle