Talk:Tantalum diselenide
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Comment on missing precise time reference
[edit]At the beginning of the second paragraph of the initial summary, the term "Recently" does not provide a specific time indications (I do not know if this means since the beginning of the 21th century, or whatever else). I suggest to provide more precise temporal indication, so that it remains clear also in future. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lauraceresa (talk • contribs) 13:20, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
General comment
[edit]The article looks complete and well-detailed in terms of all technical information. However, it is slightly difficult to understand the general meaning at first reading because the sentences are not properly structured (example: sometimes it is difficult to catch the subject of a sentence, or what the term "which" or "that" refers to).
Comment by the second reviewer
[edit]The article's topic is very interesting and the material has some very promising properties. The level of detail is very deep, even if some sentences are hard to read and some references may be missing. I made some corrections of typos and misspelled words. --Andrea Macrelli (talk) 14:48, 18 June 2021 (UTC)
Observations and suggestions for improvements
[edit]The following observations and suggestions for improvements were collected, following expert review of the article within the Science, Tecnology, Society and Wikipedia course at the Politecnico di Milano, in June 2021.
- Two references appear as "ref name=":15" />" and "<.ref name=":11" />" in the body of the article.
- alcune informazioni (ad es., che “single trilayer of 2H TaSe2, also known as 1H phase”) ed acronimi (ad es., ICDW) sono ripetuti più volte ;
- alcuni passaggi non non sono chiarissimi (ad es., cosa significa “a 3 × 3 reconstruction[9] with respect to the non-distorted lattice parameter (a = b)”?);
- alcuni informazioni potrebbero essere maggiormente dettagliate (ad es., per definire univocamente la struttura cristallografica del materiale, bisognerebbe specificare lo Space Group e tutti i parametri reticolari, inclusi gli angoli \alpha, \beta e \gamma).
- Infine, si nota ovviamente che l’autore dell’articolo non è un madrelingua inglese e, forse, qualche passaggio potrebbe essere migliorato dal punto di vista stilistico.