Talk:Templario

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Review: April 11, 2020. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

This review is transcluded from Talk:Templario/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Will be conducting this review as part of the GAN Backlog Drive of April to May 2020. MWright96 (talk) 12:11, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Lead[edit]

Templario's nationality is missing from the lead
"It is uncertain exactly when Templario made his professional wrestling career and if he has used a different ring name before adopting the "Templario" 'name" - repetition of the word "name"
"around 2012/2013." - around 2012 to 2013.
Wikilink independent circuit

Professional wrestling career[edit]

Wikilink Calpulalpan and Pachuca
"where he struck up a friendship with" - more concise; where he began a friendship with

Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre (2016–present)[edit]

Wikilink independent circuit
"when CMLL does not require them for a show" - does not require them to partake in a show
"and Latigo and Trauma I in the semi-finals." - semifinals
"Templario was involved in a multi-man steel cage match where the loser of the match would be forced to unmask." - repetition of the word "match"
"saw Templario escape the cage as the seventh man," - the seventh man to do so?

Los Guerreros Laguneros (2018–present)[edit]

"but was the tenth man eliminated as he was pinned by Volador Jr" - he was the tenth wrestler to be eliminated
"Templario competed in the 2019 Reyes del Aire tournament, marking his participation in the annual tournament for the first time." - repetition of the word "tournament"
"Templario started out by winning the 2020 Reyes del Aire lastly eliminating Star Jr." - think you want to add that this was the final of that tournament

United States independent circuit (2019–present)[edit]

"on a show in Pittsburg, Pennsylvania" - typo; should be Pittsburgh and wikilink the city and also the state of Pennysylvania
"as part of ROH's Summer Supercard pay-per-view." - think there is something missing at the end of this sentence
Wikilink Chicago and Illinois
"on September 1, 2019, and defeating Jake Lander on their December 2019 show." - try not to repeat the year in the same sentence

Footnotes[edit]

Note b: "No records of the tournament afinal have been found, it is uncertain if it was actually held." - typo; should be final
Furthermore, the same note is lacking a reliable source

Will put the review on hold to allow the nominator to address/respond to the queries raised above. MWright96 (talk) 16:22, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 I have addressed all your comments, thank you for your input. MPJ-DK (talk) 16:40, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: Very welcome :) Now promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 18:14, 11 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]