Talk:Tengo Un Amor/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: AJona1992 (talk · contribs) 03:04, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• Remember all numbers lower than 10 must be spelled out per WP:ORDINAL
• "the Top 5 of both" - change to "the top five of both"

Background

• "He says he fell in love with the genre of bachata, after being exposed to it as a child, explaining that is mother always listened to it" change to "Toby exclaimed that he fell in love with the genre of bachata, after being exposed to it as a child. He explained that his mother had always listened to that type of music."
• "His mother remarried a Dominican" change to "His mother had remarried to a Dominican"
• "merengue group as teenager" - missing a word
• No need for quotations on Mikey unless you use his full and nickname.

Composition

• You already linked bachata
• Too many sentences has the word "song" needs a variety
• "Taking influence from Michael Jackson, Lauryn Hill, Juan Luis Guerra and Héctor Lavoe, Love often combines R&B with bachata in his music which is prominent on "Tengo Un Amor"." change to "His influential musicians include Michael Jackson, Lauryn Hill, Juan Luis Guerra and Héctor Lavoe, which helped combined the mixture of R&B and bachata found on "Tengo Un Amor"."

Release

• Remember all numbers lower than 10 must be spelled out per WP:ORDINAL
• Top 10 needs to be lower case
• Too many sentences have the word "song" needs a variety
• biggest hit - needs to be in quotations.

References

• Ref#3 needs Spanish template, publisher?
• Ref#5 link St. Petersburg Times, publisher?
• Ref#7 needs Spanish template
• Ref#8 needs Spanish template
• Be consistent if you are going to always link Billboard (compare ref#12 and ref#32 and ref#33)
  •  Done, See anything else? — DivaKnockouts 04:14, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Here's my review. Thanks again for my FAC review. Best, Jona^{talk to me} 03:04, 29 April 2013 (UTC)

Thanks again AJona for your review and your welcome. Congratulations on the support :) — DivaKnockouts 04:14, 29 April 2013 (UTC)