Talk:The Beautiful World of Jeffree Star/GA1

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Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 03:53, 4 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]


  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall: Pass
    Pass/Fail:

Review[edit]

  • Is there a better reference than this one? If not, please archive it through the Wayback Machine in case it changes.
    • I added a Wayback Machine archive url.
  • Reference 32 seems unneeded (see Wikipedia:Citation overkill)
    • I deleted it.
  • Is there a better reference than the video itself to cite for the claim "Time of the Season" by The Ben Taylor Band served as the theme song of the series."
    • Not particularly, but there is a Reddit thread stating it was "Time of the Season"; however, Reddit isn't a credible source. It's listed in the Spotify playlist also referenced in the article.
  • Reference 12 is from May but is sourced for a claim for November. Can you find an updated reference?
    • The claim from November is no longer accurate since James Charles has since recoved from the 3 million subscriber drop. I reworded the sentence to make sense for the claim in May.
  • Reference 42 does not support its claim. It just shows it was trending, not that it "peaking at #1 for seven hours and staying within the top ten for fourteen hours."
    • I changed the wording to "became the #1 trending topic for several hours", which can clearly be seen in the source.


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