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GA Review

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Reviewer: Ovinus (talk · contribs) 01:30, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the ytral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Main focus will probably be parts I perceive to be promotional. I have a visceral reaction to Wikipedia company articles, so don't hesitate to push back if you feel I'm being unfair.

I totally get where you're coming from; I spent my earlier months on wikipedia cruft-cutting from corporate articles. The amount of words people can think of to say literally nothing is astounding. That said, I approached this pretty much the way I would any other article. theleekycauldron (talkcontribs) (she/they) 03:52, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

That's all for now. I made some hands-on tweaks as well. Cheers, Ovinus (talk) 02:06, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Second, quick pass

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That's all. I'll pass after we discuss the remaining comments. Ovinus (talk) 20:49, 18 April 2022 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.