Talk:The Boat Race 1995/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

Just linking years violates WP:EGG.
- Fixed. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
The President for Oxford is unknown?
- Found it... "Jeremiah McLanahan, Oxford's American president...." The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Cambridge were coached by Robin Williams was reserved in his assessment not quite
- Added missing word. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
The Oxford crew contained two native British rowers to Cambridge's five,[12] Cambridge also saw the first rower from Croatia in the Boat Race, in Marko Banovic. I don't think a comma works well there, use a semi-colon.
- Re-worded. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Although rating considerably lower than Oxford Can you link "rating" somewhere?
- Ok. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Do you know the sponsorship, on this or The Boat Race 1994?
- Yep, Beefeater, so added it. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

OK. Seattle (talk) 23:55, 6 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Many thanks, I've addressed all of your points I hope. The Rambling Man (talk) 06:20, 7 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]