Talk:The Boat Race 1999

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Review: August 8, 2014. (Reviewed version).

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Seattle (talk · contribs) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I'll review this soon. Seattle (talk) 23:59, 5 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Comments:

Only linking years violates WP:EGG
- I thought the context of adding "race" after was sufficient. See if I've fixed it... The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
  - Yes, that's enough context. Seattle (talk) 15:09, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
rowed unsuccessfully for Oxford in the 1959 race before triumphing the following year. I would reword, I don't think one can "row unsuccessfully"
- Reworded. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
introduced modifications to the starting procedure can you be more specific?
- Added more. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
Sean Bowden was head coach of Oxford is that a false title?
- added "the". The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
They passed the finishing post three lengths ahead, with an eleven-second advantage over the Dark Blues, in a time of 16 minutes 41 seconds, a time only bettered once before, in 1998. Staggered sentence by all of the commas. The infobox gives the lead at 3.5 lengths, while the text gives 3
- Rephrased. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
If the time was the second-best in the history of the event, I think that deserves a mention in the lead.
- Added mention. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]
The record reserve race time should be mentioned in the lead.
- Added. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

OK. Seattle (talk) 13:47, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks again. The Rambling Man (talk) 14:48, 8 August 2014 (UTC)[reply]