Talk:The Brothers' War

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I changed the sentence "Tawnos brings his wife and newborn son (possibly nephew) to him, and together they begin to build an opposing army to Mishra" to "Tawnos brings Urza's wife and newborn son..." because the use of the pronoun "his" may lead readers to mistakenly believe to believe that the sentence refers to Tawnos' family. 192.139.191.15 (talk) 13:55, 14 March 2011 (UTC)[reply]

why did the brother's war being

Not having references: The reference is the book itself.
Plot summary too long compared to rest of article: Problem isn't that the plot summary is too long, but that there isn't anything else on the article. It doesn't mean we should shrink the plot summary.
Neutrality affected by weasel words: There can't possibly be any weasel words in the plot summary itself, and the only other paragraph in the article doesn't have any weasel words.

74.178.214.166 (talk) 19:25, 14 August 2009 (UTC)[reply]