Talk:The Cutie Map/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 05:51, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Copy changes

Lead

• Comma before "respectively"
  •  Done
• Change series' to series's
  •  Done

Production and promotion

• Add a comma after "Starlight Glimmer" in the first sentence
  •  Done
• Remove comma after "Yahoo TV Videos"
  •  Done

Content

If I hadn't been exposed to MLP:FiM material before, I'd be asking myself a question right now, one that some of your readers undoubtedly will if they find this page: What is a cutie mark? An explanation or definition belongs in the lead or the plot summary here because of the significance of cutie marks to the episode plot.

• Explained

Other items

• The plot summary is 549 words total. Covering two half-hour episodes at an average of 275 words, this meets WP:TVPLOT's length limit.
• References are archived.
• No images.
• Earwig mostly catches the name of the series because it's six words.

@Pamzeis: Putting this GA on hold for the four minor copy fixes and, more importantly, so that a description of cutie marks can be placed in this article. It's absolutely necessary here so that readers unfamiliar with the series can parse the plot and its significance. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 06:10, 28 January 2022 (UTC)

@Sammi Brie: Hopefully, all  Done. Pamzeis (talk) 01:51, 29 January 2022 (UTC)

That'll do it. Will pass. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 05:26, 29 January 2022 (UTC)