Talk:The Guy Who Didn't Like Musicals

General improvement needed

The way this article is written reeks of inexperience, it feels unprofessional and poorly done overall. (I'm mostly referring to the plot summary here, the rest is essentially fine) It's long-winded and phrased like a story and not a Wikipedia article. It needs to be significantly shortened and redone in a way that doesn't feel soul-crushingly amateur and biased. If this is the first thing people see when they look this musical up, I imagine their impression will be that TGWDLM itself is low quality and not worth watching or interacting with. First impressions, people, we don't want to make Starkid out to be as bad as the content of this page.