Talk:The Kite That Went to the Moon

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Hello there, the link you used for "Evelyn Sharp" is for an American aviator and not the British author. Here is the proper link http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Evelyn_Sharp_(suffragist)

Summary Confusion[edit]

In the end of the story, did the kite return to the sky as a comet before Jerry and Chubby were able to show it off to the other children? I found that part a bit confusing. Madwel (talk) 22:41, 15 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Characters[edit]

The characters section would be more concise if listed one character at a time, for readers convience and quick use. Also, I suggest introducing them before the summary to get reader familar with them before. MermaiddolphinOGT (talk) —Preceding undated comment added 00:35, 16 February 2013 (UTC)[reply]