Talk:The Ninja Warriors (1994 video game)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 00:05, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

Another one! Cognissonance (talk) 00:05, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

Lead

• Note [a] should preferably be sourced.
  • Done

Gameplay

• side-scrolling beat 'em up WP:SEAOFBLUE Find a way to separate them
  • Done
• ninja androids WP:SEAOFBLUE ——"——
  • Done
• The player can moves "move*"
  • Done
• and the stages are typically linear in one direction and end with a boss Improve flow: "with the stages typically going in a linear direction and ending with a boss"
  • Done

Development and release

• some minor censorship, replacing some female Avoid repetition, remove the first "some"
  • Done

Reception

• character movesets That written correctly?
  • No I rewrote it to eliminate the word movesets
• all which help set "all of* which"
  • Done
• but the game is greater than the sum of its parts Clarify: "but that it was greater than the sum of its parts"
  • Done

Overall

No dead refs or high copyvio. Onhold. Cognissonance (talk) 00:52, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

@Cognissonance: Done. Thanks for yet again another review! TarkusAB^talk 21:39, 10 July 2018 (UTC)

@TarkusAB: My pleasure. Thanks for improving smaller articles. Cognissonance (talk) 21:48, 10 July 2018 (UTC)