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Good articleThe Ones (30 Rock) has been listed as one of the Media and drama good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Good topic starThe Ones (30 Rock) is part of the 30 Rock season 3 series, a good topic. This is identified as among the best series of articles produced by the Wikipedia community. If you can update or improve it, please do so.
Article milestones
DateProcessResult
April 9, 2010Good article nomineeListed
July 29, 2010Good topic candidatePromoted
Current status: Good article

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Reviewer: Wizardman Operation Big Bear 20:25, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Overall this article is good, though I found a couple issues:

  • "At the beginning of the episode, Jack and Liz are at a jewelry store, in which Jack is searching for an engagement ring for Elisa, was filmed at a Cartier store located in New York's Fifth Avenue." Not grammatically sound. Maybe 'It was filmed' or modify how it's written.
  • "which Jenna misquotes actress Julia Roberts' character from the romantic comedy Notting Hill (1999)." Maybe 'misquotes from actress..' would sound better.
    • Done.
  • "As with Sepinwall, Bob Sassone of AOL's TV Squad believed Jenna's subplot was fair writing it was great in parts but "it just went on too long and got tedious and silly."" Feels like it's missing a word or comma around the fair writing note.
    • I think I got it.

I'll put it on hold and will pass it when the few nitpicks are fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 20:25, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks for the review. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 20:42, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
No problem. Looks good now, so article passes. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 22:33, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
Thank you for taking the time to review this. :) --  ThinkBlue  (Hit BLUE) 22:39, 9 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
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