Talk:The Pleiades (volcano group)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hog Farm (talk · contribs) 22:44, 13 April 2020 (UTC)

Criteria

1. Prose ✓ Pass

2. Verifiability ✓ Pass

3. Depth of Coverage ✓ Pass

4. Neutral ✓ Pass

5. Stable ✓ Pass

6. Illustrations ✓ Pass

7. Miscellaneous ✓ Pass

Comments

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• "140 kilometres (87 mi)[3]-120 kilometres (75 mi) away" - Use an endash

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• "It is formed by three separate cones" - What is it? I'm assuming it's the compound stratovolcano, can this be made more clear?

  Mount Atlas. The toponyms Mount Atlas and Mount Pleiones are used in a incoherent manner in most sources. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• "but much smaller" --> "but is much smaller"

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• " but much smaller, it has two poorly defined craters" - Either replace the comma with a semicolon or break the sentence there.

  Broke the sentence here. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• "Taygete Cone 6 kilometres (3.7 mi) north of Mount Atlas" --> "Taygete Cone, which is 6 kilometers (3.7 mi) north of Mount Atlas,"

  Sure? To me this looks like correct grammar. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• "Apart from lava flows " --> "Apart from the lava flows"

  Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• AD is duplinked
• "A glass layer " - Link this to volcanic glass, I'm assuming that's the intended meaning.

  Seems like, added a link. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

• If I'm reading MOS:DASH correctly, the ranges of years in the Eruption history section should have en dashes.

  Seems like, added them. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

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• Ref 1 needs an accessdate

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Placing on hold, not much to do on this one. Hog Farm (talk) 03:33, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

@Hog Farm: Done so far. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 09:19, 14 April 2020 (UTC)

Good work. Promoting. 15:23, 14 April 2020 (UTC)