Talk:The Simpsons: Bartman Meets Radioactive Man/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Namcokid47 (talk · contribs) 21:00, 9 March 2020 (UTC)

Instantly failing nomination due to the article not meeting the GA criteria. There are several reasons as to why, which are listed below.

• Very little in the way of references; lots had to be cut out for not being verifiable or simply unreliable (like MobyGames). Additional, many sections (namely the near-entirety of the gameplay) have no references at all.
• No gameplay screenshot.
• Gameplay section itself talks very little about the gameplay, only providing a short plot summary and vague sentences about what it's actually about.
• Many things in the article are not sourced, such as the release date, who worked on it, etc.
• Review scores for video games do not belong in the paragraphs themselves. That requires a video game review template, which this article lacks.
• Ref 6 isn't archived properly and is missing a lot of required parameters.
• Article itself is full of poor writing. Most of the reception is just quotes ripped from whatever publications covered it. It isn't even stringed together to form a cohesive summary of what the reviewers thought about it, instead just being "publication said this, publication said that". There's also other poorly-worded sentences throughout the article too, such as "criticism being directed at the gameplay control."
• The reviewer for the article also does not seem to be a major contributor to the page itself, simply adding a review or two and some very minor corrections.

Namcokid47 ^(Contribs) 21:00, 9 March 2020 (UTC)