Talk:The Splendid Source/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I'm going to review this, since it's been at GAN forever. It'll be a few days before I get to it though, have a very large article to finish reviewing. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:42, 8 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

Patrick Meighan links to a dab page; fix so it goes to the right guy.
- Done. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"Main cast member, and formerly a series writer, Mike Henry," reads a bit iffy. Suggest "Main cast member and former series writer.." also, is he still a main cast member? I presume so, as i would think he voiced more than just Cleveland. If not then put former at the start.
- Done. And yes, he is still listed in the credits as a main cast member. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"film series," comma unneeded.
- Done. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"the only show with any sense of mystery." cite needed for quote
- Done. Gage (talk) 05:25, 12 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Just a couple issues. Article will be on hold for 5 days, when fixed I'll pass it. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 03:53, 12 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good now, so the article passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:33, 12 November 2010 (UTC)[reply]