Talk:The View from Halfway Down/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:03, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:03, 1 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good.
• Don't link dinner party, talent show, or swimming pool per WP:OVERLINK.
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Plot

• Without the names in parathesis, this section is 414 words. MOS:TVPLOT says that episode-articles should be at max 400 words so try removing some.
  •  Done 376 words now, minus the parenthetical acting credits Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Also, some links here and in other sections lead to disambiguation pages, so try fixing those links.
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Production

• You can't cite WP:IMDB, even if you disguise it as the Internet Movie Database.
  •  Done My bad. Some 30 Rock GAs use that format (e.g. "Emanuelle Goes to Dinosaur Land"). Replaced with a podcast interview with Tafel and an online newspaper interview with Winfrey. Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• "Kazzaz'" → "Kazzaz's"
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Remove the comma after "within the show".
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• "with series finale" → "with the series finale"
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• "V." → "V".
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The line containing "suicide by jumping" should probably link to "Later", the episode in which the event took place.
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• "[i]t felt" → "it felt"
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Reception

• "an A writing, stating" → "an "A", stating"
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Link IndieWire.
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The first sentence says the episode received praise from "many reviewers", but only two are listed that actually talked about the episode. Try adding more.
  •  Done Rewrote/regrouped the entire section after digging up more articles Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• The last sentence has a source from Gold Derby, a website that isn't that reliable. Can a more reliable source be swapped in?
  •  Done Replaced with an IndieWire citation saying that "Free Churro" was the first nomination in that category for BoJack Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

References

• Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from The New York Times with "|url-access=limited".
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Mark references from Forbes with "|url-access=limited".
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)
• Try linking every website used in every citation.
  •  Done Kncny11 ^(shoot) 17:53, 2 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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