Talk:There Is a Hell Believe Me I've Seen It. There Is a Heaven Let's Keep It a Secret./GA2

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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 06:42, 21 October 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry to say that for a {{non-free}} template being in place prior to the beginning of the review, this nomination is being automatically failed. Please address concerns with all non-free content to avoid copyvios before renominating. Here are some other comments I'll give to also address:

• "Release history" shouldn't be used in infobox; just list the first release date
• Only the first release should date be mentioned in the lead. No need for geographic locations, either.
• Per WP:LEADCITE, citations are generally not required in the WP:LEAD since it is supposed to be a summary of the article, and content should be supported within article body
• "In late-March the third music video"..... remove the hyphen and place a comma after the month
• "In late-August the fourth music video"..... same as above
• ‘ and ’ should be ' per MOS:QUOTEMARKS
• Exclaim!, NME, Kerrang!, Rock Sound, and Big Cheese (magazine) should be italicized
• The "M" in AllMusic should be capitalized
• "Mike Diver writing BBC Music"..... there should be a "for" after "writing"
• Ultimate Guitar Archive is not reliable per WP:ALBUM/SOURCES, and I'm not convinced "Metal Insider", "Metal Injection", or "Play4me Entertainment" are the best of references.

Better luck next time. On a plus note, this article is definitely broad and stable.