Talk:Three Horses Beer/GA1
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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 11:51, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
Checklist[edit]
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments[edit]
I'll get started on this one today. --Coemgenus (talk) 11:51, 1 July 2015 (UTC)
This is a well-written article, not much to quibble with.
- Lede
"Star Breweries also produces THB Fresh, a shandy (locally called panaché), with less than 1% alcohol, THB Special (6.2% alcohol), and THB Lite, a low alcohol beer (1%)." This sentence has some confusing commas. I'd suggest using semi-colons or more parentheses.
- Production
"...a type of mushroom is added..." That's an interesting detail. Do you know which kind of mushroom?
- Images
File:THB.JPG concerns me. The license says it's the uploader's own work, but it looks a lot like the company's advertising. Do you know any more about it?
- References
- Footnotes 20 and 22 are deadlinks.