Talk:Tibbers Castle/GA1

GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Well constructed, will get back shortly. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 06:05, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Para 1; sentence 2; Use past tense of the word "record" i.e "recorded". Comma(,) after Sir Richard Siward must be removed. Because it completely disrupts the sentence meaning.
Para 1; last sentence; Add a comma(,) after "In 1302".
Para 2; In the sentence "...rs to George Crichton, Lord High Admiral of Scotland and later 1st ....". Add "to the" after "later".

No issues in this section.

In last sentence change the tense to "took place" instead of "have taken", because the years of happening were mentioned.

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 09:13, 24 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

All good suggestions, done so far. Richard Nevell (talk) 11:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

I've done a couple of edits. Good to go.

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 12:21, 25 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you for reviewing the article! Richard Nevell (talk) 12:28, 25 September 2016 (UTC)[reply]