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Hi,I´ve just tried to improve the article´s grammar, vocabulary and sentence orders at first. It seems the author translated it from the German WP literally. That´s a pity, because it could be an interesting object for wine lovers. Have a nice evening! Prooflib (talk) 16:57, 5 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
I'm a German reader and could make some good guesses at the text. I've spruced it up a bit more, and reordered some of the sentences. Needs more work by someone who knows wine processing, and the fruit business in the Brandenburg March. Or the original author can contact me if he/she wishes, and we can work on something together. Auntieruth55 (talk) 00:13, 16 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
Hi Auntieruth55, Thanks for having made a clean up of the article. I just have poor english language skills. Please have a look at this sites. [1], [2], [3] --Beaverbear (talk) 18:03, 16 April 2009 (UTC)[reply]
