Talk:Timothy Eaton Memorial Church

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Not Objective[edit]

I removed the following sentences as they are unsuitable for an objective encyclopedia article. They read like an advertisement for the church and proselytize for Christianity.

"It features a renowned Christmas pageant which is an unforgettable experience as the church takes great pride in this uplifting celebration of the Nativity and the miracle of Christmas. This church offers programs and events for all people of all ages.

At Timothy Eaton Memorial Church, adults, children and families find a lively, engaging setting where they can participate in activities that contribute to a richer and fuller life. Everyone needs a place in life where they have strong foundations and a spiritual home in which they belong. Everyone is invited to visit or join and celebrate God's love together with a community of like-minded people."

Cunningpal (talk) 23:44, 11 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]