Talk:Toli Masjid/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Aintabli (talk · contribs) 12:34, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Length would not normally be a factor in GAs, but this article is too underdeveloped in my honest opinion. There are one or two sentence-long sections. Sections crucial for such articles, such as Toli Masjid#Interior, are not fleshed out enough. Much of the sources come from news sites. I would expect some more variety, especially since sources on this mosque do not appear to be hard to find. I believe this list of good articles on relevant topics could be a good reference for a future nomination. If the last two sections cannot be expanded enough, they would have to be merged with other sections, otherwise this goes against MOS:BODY, and more from the already used sources could be included in the article, specifically this. I suggest creating a Bibliography or Sources section, so that each page could be separately cited, instead of repeatedly using the same references which include ranges of pages. Aintabli (talk) 12:34, 3 August 2023 (UTC)[reply]