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GA Review

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Reviewer: TonyTheTiger (talk · contribs) 14:29, 9 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Early life and high school
College and military career
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  • I am very much on the fence on whether this really covers the topic. It does not tell me much about the guy as a player. I understand that he played in an era when things like tackles weren't even recorded. However, an article about a Pro Bowler should speak of his legend. He was a hart hitter, or strategic leader. As he was in a battle with Motley, you might want to mention what attributes and deficiencies each brought to the table.--TonyTheTiger (T / C / WP:FOUR / WP:CHICAGO / WP:WAWARD) 05:47, 15 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]
    • If there were information in the sources about what he was like as a hitter or tackler, I'd surely include it. I haven't been able to find any yet. I think there's a reasonable amount of detail about what he was like as a player, although as you say, one reason there's not more detail is that there aren't a lot of defensive statistics from this era. I added some more detail about how he compared with Motley, although of course that competition lasted only a short time. While I think it covers the main aspects of the topic without going into unnecessary detail, as the criteria require, I understand where you're coming from here. --Batard0 (talk) 07:53, 15 October 2013 (UTC)[reply]