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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Tony Okanlawon/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (No original research): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:

Notes

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  • added cat Players of American football from Maryland  Done
  • "In the season finale of the 1999" fix grammar  Done
    • Done.
  • Do you know if there is a link for source one or is it offline?  Done
    • Added links for each offline source.
  • "He started eleven games in as a junior" fix grammar  Done
    • Done.
  • "and by the end of week five had" comma after five  Done
    • Added.
  • "Okanlawon missed four games due to a "medical issue" which coach" comma after issue  Done
    • Done.
  • Add first team all acc to the infobox  Done
    • Added.
  • According to ArenaFan, he was signed on jan 5 and waived on jan 17?  Done
  • Lagos, Nigeria is linked differently in the infobox and article. Should probably be consistent.  Done
    • Made consistent.
  • Could you find anything on his life after football? Maybe he has a linkedin page, lol.  Done

I think that's all. WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 03:09, 20 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]

All points have been addressed. Passing the article. Nice work! WikiOriginal-9 (talk) 14:37, 26 October 2023 (UTC)[reply]