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2014 class review

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Hello! This page was written well! I made a few edits due to typos and fixed a few awkwards sentences. Otherwise it looks like you're off to a great start! Terose92 (talk) 22:29, 22 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

This is a fabulous first article! I can see where you've paid a lot of attention to the article layout, headings, and references, and added a lot of descriptive content. There are a few spots where I might try to clean up your references a little more: with reference #1 you could probably find a date, and with #7 possibly an author and a little more description on who actually created the chronology. I think you've got a great start on the lede, but I wonder if there are other important facts to pull out there, especially since you have several Globe articles to pull from. For example, in the "Art Laurels" article from 1987 it states that the Triangle was still Boston's "only gay-identified theater" -- that sort of "first" or "only" is good information for the lede. You've also got a prompt for adding categories at the bottom, and could add a theatre infobox. I think you've done a good job of finding additional newspaper articles, so it would be interesting to see if you could pull any more info from those sources into the main body, particularly references to the theater's historical impact or success. Good job with the additional research! AmandaRR123 (talk) 15:34, 4 November 2014 (UTC)[reply]