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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Tricholoma vernaticum/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: J Milburn (talk · contribs) 20:19, 5 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Looks uncontroversial.

  • "and several former mycorrhizal Armillaria" How about "several mycorrhizal former Armillaria"?
  • Armillaria olida or Armillaria olidum? Also, what does the species name mean?
  • "The name Tricholoma olida was unavailable for this species, because it was previously used in 1920 by Josef Velenovský," Probably not important, but it is a short article- do we know what that's known as today?
  • "The ring, located" Link?
  • It's odd that you spell out micrometer on the fourth mention, but not otherwise.
  • "typically in the fall season" Autumn, perhaps? Fall is a word not used in the UK; I appreciate that it's in American English, so if you prefer fall, keep it.

Images and sources seem fine. A Google search throws up nothing that's been missed; certainly shorter, but key questions are answered, so I'm happy that it's a suitable GA candidate. J Milburn (talk) 20:19, 5 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]