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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 17:52, 25 May 2017 (UTC)
Lead
[edit]- related to the matter → related to that matter
Done
- to keep those tracks for herself, because she considered them too personal → to keep those tracks for herself as she considered them too personal
Done
- released independently → other way round
Done
- Unlink "record deal" as it's a pretty common term
Done
- the tracks talk about her "most intense" love affair → you don't need the "..." here
Done
- mostly positive reviews from critics → you can add "music" to critics to sound better
Done
- It peaked at number 13 → state "the record" here as it may get confused with "the songs"
Done
- the forty-ninth best-selling album during 2014 in the country → 2014's 49th best-selling album in the country
Done
- spending 23 weeks on the chart → leave "on the chart" out as you have Norwegian Albums Chart
Done
- The Great Escape Festival in United Kingdom → add "the" before United Kigdom
Done
- was released as the third single from the EP. It was a commercial success in Europe and Oceania → (to avoid word repetition) was released as the third single from the EP to commercial success in Europe and Oceania, ...
Done
Infobox
[edit]- You need alternative text for the cover art
Done
Background and release
[edit]- with whom played → with whom she played
- an English A&R → link "A&R" to artist and repertoire
- writing songs about the matter → "the" to "that"
- could not handled it anymore → is it supposed to mean "could not handle it anymore"?
- the artist released independently → the artist independendly released
- It received a larger attention from music blogs → state "from publications" here to avoid repetition
- Unlink "record deal", as in the lead
- and that it will be released → and that it would be released
Inspiration and composition
[edit]- several songs prior the release → several songs prior to the release
- were taken from the demos → were taken from her demos + unlink "demos"
- that; "When you look → that "when you look
- to being under the influence of drugs.[38][39][40][27] → fix the order of the references
- "[could not] think straight".[41][8] → same
- her boyfriend end the relationship.[43][29] → same
Promotion
[edit]- which are represented as black ghosts.[50][25] → order of references
- The song was a commercial success → say "the recording" here to avoid repetition
- It was a commercial success in some European countries → It similarly experienced success in Europe
- for her first UK show → for her first show in the United Kingdom
- on American TV → on American television
- on American music TV → same as above
Critical reception
[edit]- received mostly positive reviews → ... from [[Music journalism|music critics]]
- Alex Panisch → you have already mentioned him, so only state "Panisch" here
- of the Norwegian publication of Gaffa → second "of" is superfluous
Commercial performance
[edit]- was the forty-ninth best-selling → was the 49th best-selling
Track listing
[edit]- flawless ;)
Personnel
[edit]- Credits and personnel for Truth Serum adapted from the Swedish edition of the EP. → Credits adapted from the Swedish version of Truth Serum
Charts
[edit]- flawless
Release histrory
[edit]- Unlink all labels and formats here
Other stuff
[edit]Copy-violation
[edit]- 35.1% is acceptable!
Images
[edit]- All seems fine with that image ;)
Samples
[edit]- You need to add a use rationale for Truth Serum to the sample; as it stands now, it is only to be used on "Habits (Stay High)". See this as an example.
Links
[edit]References
[edit]- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
- 1 dead link! Please fix this!
Outcome
[edit]Great job on the article! Putting this On hold for 7 days. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:00, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
- @Cartoon network freak: I have addressed all of your comments! Thank you so much for reviewing this article. Have a nice day! --Paparazzzi (talk) 22:02, 28 May 2017 (UTC)
- Gladly passing this! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 04:38, 29 May 2017 (UTC)
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