Talk:Turkey Tolson Tjupurrula

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Date	Process	Result
November 28, 2012	Good article nominee	Listed

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GA Review[edit]

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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 11:46, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"and the longest-serving chairman of the Papunya Tula Artists company." -suggest replacing the underline with "its"
"Contemporary Indigenous Australian art of the western desert began" - suggest to replace it with eg "arose", to avoid two times "began"
" geeometrical" - geometrical?--Tomcat (7) 19:16, 27 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Thank you Tomcat, that was much appreciated, and I have made changes in response to you three points. hamiltonstone (talk) 00:00, 28 November 2012 (UTC)[reply]