Talk:Typhoon Cecil (1985)/GA1
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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 19:46, 1 April 2020 (UTC)
- "a tropical developed," missing a word here
- "70,000 t (77,160 short tons)" Metric tons? Actually, could you please spell it out throughout the article? It isn't a well-known abbreviation.
- "of rice were wiped away" I can't check the source, but did floodwaters actually remove the rice from the land?
- "769 people were killed and 128 were reported missing while 200 were wounded" I think this would read better as just "769 people were killed, 128 were reported missing, and 200 were wounded"
- An increase in organization prompted the JTWC to classify the system as a tropical depression later that day, although post-season analysis revealed that Cecil was already a tropical storm by the time it entered the South China Sea." Probably should either adjust the TD part according to the post-season analysis or ax it and just say when the system became a TS.
- Capitalize the "hunter" on Hurricane Hunter. Additionally, I would either remove plane or aircraft from that sentence.
- "typhoon clearing" verb tense... also a typo later in that sentence
- "Heavy rains in Thailand causes" verb tense
- Link Vietnamese Government
- Link Government of Australia
- Add "the" before British Red Cross
Just some minor things for the most part. Good work on the storm. NoahTalk 19:46, 1 April 2020 (UTC)