Talk:Typhoon Gay (1992)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricanefan25 (talk · contribs) 16:51, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

I'll take this one too. The review should be up by Wednesday evening. HurricaneFan 25 16:51, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
- You don't have to get every single one, you know ;) Thanks though. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:05, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]
  - Well, I wantz to get ahead in this ;) HurricaneFan 25 17:32, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

GA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria

Is it reasonably well written?
A. Prose quality:
After passing through the country, it intensified its peak intensity over open waters Its peak intensity intensified? :P
Aww shucks. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

No Marshall Islands citizens were killed → No citizens of Marshall Islands were killed
Tweaked. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

JTWC upgraded Gay to a super typhoon, which is a Tighten by removing "which is"
Disagreed, I feel that the current wording is ideal. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

Link Typhoon Omar?
It's already linked twice in the article. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

On Saipan to the north → To the north at Saipan
Righty-o! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 17:48, 5 December 2011 (UTC)[reply]

That's it! :)

B. MoS compliance for lead, layout, words to watch, fiction, and lists:
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