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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 16:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]


Another typhoon -- fun will be had by all. Courcelles (talk) 16:41, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

  • Marshall Islands or the Marshall Islands? I've always heard it with the definite article?
  • "Hester began to curve eastward and began to weaken rapidly." Try to avoid using "began" twice in one sentence.
  • "The Navy estimated" Spell out which navy you mean.
  • Non-fatal injuries are also casualties, so you have the wrong word in "Overall, eighteen people were injured on Enewetak, and there were no casualties." You mean no fatalities.
  • Next sentence needs to start with a "The"
  • "Hester past south of Guam" Hester passed.

Courcelles (talk) 16:54, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]

@Courcelles: Once again, thanks for the review.Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:14, 24 April 2018 (UTC)[reply]