Talk:Typhoon Noul (2015)/GA1

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 15:00, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. The article is exceptionally well-written. I have only a few comments: Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 15:00, 1 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks so much! Hope I got all of these. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

In the lead:

I am not sure if this would be redundant - can we add the typhoon season?

It's in the second sentence, but I piped the link - annual typhoon season

I see. Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 04:33, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Link Philippines and Japan

Got it. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

In Meteorological history:

I think the year should be mentioned at the beginning of the main text.

Added. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Philippines is linked twice

Got it. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

In Preparations and impact:

Duplinks: Federated States of Micronesia, Cagayan, Ishigaki Island

Got it. ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

known as Typhoon Dodong within the country Need not be repeated, this has already been mentioned.

I only felt it necessary to emphasize again in the Philippines impact section. Most of the references in the links talk about Dodong, not Noul, so I was on the side of caution. Does that work? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 19:06, 2 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

That's a good idea. Let it stay, then. Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 04:33, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks a lot Hurricanehink, you have been as fast as a hurricane! I would be happy to promote such a wonderful article. Sainsf <^>_{Talk all words} 04:33, 3 March 2016 (UTC)[reply]