Talk:Typhoon Yunya (1991)/GA1

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Reviewer: Usernameunique (talk · contribs) 04:58, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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Similar comment re Diding — Any information on its naming, and how about adding to body of article?
- Yea this is the exact same situation as before. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
a strong tropical cyclone that weakened before impacting the Philippines — Winds itself in a bit of a circle. Is it really first-sentence worthy?
- I'll just simplify that down and remove the weakening bit. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Meteorological history

On June 11, 1991, — You read my mind on that one.
- Kek. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Tropical Upper Tropospheric Trough — Why the caps?
- Probably because the article was capitalized at some point and I never got out of the habit of lowercasing it. Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
USNS Spica — This thing?
- Linked. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Although already a tropical storm, the JTWC — First the JTWC struck Hainan, and now it's a tropical storm? Mind you, that might explain how it was able to strike Hainan...
- Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Impact

destroyed bridges Santa Fe — in Santa Fe? Anything to link to for Santa Fe?
- Fixed and added. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
prompting concern from residents — Any more details?
- No and kinda tempted to remove it altogether. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
carried ash within 160 km (100 mi) away from Pinatubo, — within/away sounds contradictory.
- Removed the latter. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
As a result of the lahars, ... As a result of the lahars, — Repetition.
- Changed the second. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Just to confirm, so two bus-terminal rooves collapsed?
- Yes. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]
Excluding from laharsh — lahars?
- Ugh, I was going too fast :P Fixed. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 06:35, 28 April 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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