Talk:Ugly (Sugababes song)/GA1
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 17:30, 1 April 2012 (UTC) Hello, I will be reviewing this article. 17:13, 1 April 2012 (UTC)
- Thankyou, Calvin! Till I Go Home (talk) 07:37, 2 April 2012 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (references):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
- a (references):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Infobox
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- Use {{duration|m=3|s=02}} and {{duration|m=3|s=50}}
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Remove the extra tracklising for the album. It's not needed.
Lead
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- "who primarily produced Taller in More Ways." → Sounds like he got first say on producing the album. Change to "who produced the majority of Taller in More Ways.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- If you are going to have a quote in the lead then you need to put the source for it.
Done, Removed quote. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- link [[Music journalism|music critics]]
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- I'll do a slight c/e at the end.
- Thanks. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
Background and release
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- Link Taller in more Ways the firs time.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- was an inspiration for the song. → remove "an"
Composition and lyrics
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- Need a much better rationale for the audio file. How long is it? What does it present to the listener?
Done. Expanded it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- I guess there's no much info for the composition but you've done well with what you have.
Critical reception
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- "Ugly" has received positive reviews from music critics. → "Ugly" garnered positive reviews from music critics.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- This section is very quotey, can you paraphrase some of them?
- Could do with a bit of refining.
Chart performance
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- This section needs work. Do you want me to c/e it?
- Yes please. Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- I think you mean "chart performance" since you already reviewed the critical reception up there (above)? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:47, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Yes Lol. Aaron • You Da One 17:16, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
- I think you mean "chart performance" since you already reviewed the critical reception up there (above)? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:47, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Yes please. Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
Promotion - Music video
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- Any reviews?
- Nope. It was a pain to even get info about the music video itself. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
Promotion - Live performances
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- 2006 alongside singles → as part of a set list, which included
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- You say that their performances were praised by critics, so can you say what the critics actually said?
Done. Quoted the critics' words. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
Track listings
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- Remove the release dates.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Single should not to be capitalised.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Play should not to be capitalised.
Credits and personnel
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- Where are the credits adapted from? Write it instead of "Source"
Done. Wrote Discogs. If I get the album, I will change it. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm okay. Can't you try ASCAP or BMI? Aaron • You Da One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
Charts - Weekly charts
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- Please can you have marked up the table according to WP:ACCESS :)
- Don't understand :S Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- You've done it lol. Aaron • You Da One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
- Don't understand :S Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- It says 2005/06. There should be two separate tables, one for peaks in 2005, one for peaks in 2006.
Charts - Year-end charts
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- What's mark up? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Done it for you. Aaron • You Da One
- What's mark up? Till I Go Home (talk) 03:34, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Again, tables should be separated.
Release hsitory
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- No issues :).
References
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- Ensure titles aren't in complete capitcals
- It is now Official Charts Company, without the "The"
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Ref 7 is missing a publisher.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Ref 29 is missing a publisher.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Ref 30 is missing a publisher.
Done. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- Unlinked ref 47's work and publisher parameters and link ref 13's.
- I can't. Till I Go Home (talk) 09:09, 7 April 2012 (UTC)
- iTunes references are perfect!
Summary
[edit]Good job, on hold for 7 days. Aaron • You Da One 21:58, 6 April 2012 (UTC)
- All done :). passed. Aaron • You Da One 17:30, 17 April 2012 (UTC)
- Thanks :) Till I Go Home (talk) 03:01, 18 April 2012 (UTC)