Talk:Unrequited (The X-Files)/GA1
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Reviewer: TBrandley (talk · contribs) 18:34, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
I will be performing a review later today. TBrandley (what's up) 18:34, 1 January 2013 (UTC)
- "aired" perhaps "originally aired"?
- Upon linking "Monster-of-the-Week", please do not include the quotation marks
- Check the lead's first paragraph usage of "episode" at the near beginning of their first sentences, and perhaps replace some with different words
- "the mysterious murder of a U.S. Army Lieutenant General has Mulder and Scully racing against the clock to stop a seemingly unstoppable and invisible assassin" how can you assure that all of that sentence represents a neutral point of view, and not personal analysis.
- "American POW's still being kept in Vietnam" that provides a link to Vietnam War POW/MIA issue, but it is not publicly visible generally, so per WP:EASTEREGG, I would suggest stating the Vietnam War in the article's context, place the link there, hence why you should then removing the Easter egg link
- The same seems to go for "mark their kills"
- "warehouse, duly" unnecessary comma?
- In the production section, link "Jericho Park" per WP:UNDERLINK
- Could you dig up some information about the British broadcast in the reception section, which would be beneficent to the article
- "Wanting to Believe: A Critical Guide to The X-Files, Millennium & The Lone Gunmen" bibliographical works should be in italics per WP:ITALICS
TBrandley (what's up) 03:24, 29 January 2013 (UTC)
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